[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-message-signatures-16

2023-02-14 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04

2023-02-14 Thread Lars Eggert
Pete, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Oct 28, 2022, at 01:13, Pete Resnick via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Pete Resnick > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-10

2023-02-14 Thread Lars Eggert
Thomas, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Jan 24, 2023, at 20:35, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07

2023-02-14 Thread Lars Eggert
Meral, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Jan 14, 2023, at 01:57, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04

2023-02-14 Thread Mark Nottingham
Hi Pete, I like the suggestion below; anyone else have an issue with incorporating it? Cheers, > >> On Oct 28, 2022, at 01:13, Pete Resnick via Datatracker >> wrote: >> >> This paragraph in section 4 struck me oddly: >> >> An extension member (see Section 3.2) MAY occur in the Problem fiel