Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-drip-auth-24

2022-10-14 Thread Adam Wiethuechter
Responses in-line - with extra removed for clarity. 73, Adam T. Wiethuechter Software Engineer; AX Enterprize, LLC On 10/13/2022 3:06 PM, Adam Wiethuechter wrote: From: Matt Joras via Datatracker Reviewer: Matt Joras Review res

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-07

2022-10-14 Thread Russ Housley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-14 Thread Russ Housley
Robert: Thanks for the prompt review. > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comm

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-14 Thread Robert Sparks
trimming: On 10/14/22 2:57 PM, Russ Housley wrote: Robert: Thanks for the prompt review. Happy to be able to get it out quickly. Genart is crunched. Minor Issue: The document says operators need to not use colliding names but then explicitly declaires on how an operator would know if a nam

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-14

2022-10-14 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informatio