Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05

2020-04-28 Thread Balázs Varga A
Hi Tim, Thanks for the explicit suggestions, I agree that makes text clearer. I will update the draft accordingly in the suggested format. Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Tim Evens (tievens) Sent: Tuesday, April 28, 2020 1:48 AM To: Balázs Varga A ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-iet

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05

2020-04-28 Thread Tim Evens (tievens)
Thanks. On 4/28/20, 2:33 AM, "Balázs Varga A" wrote: Hi Tim, Thanks for the explicit suggestions, I agree that makes text clearer. I will update the draft accordingly in the suggested format. Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Tim Evens (tievens)

Re: [Gen-art] [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-20

2020-04-28 Thread Gyan Mishra
Thanks Christoph & Alissa Gyan On Wed, Apr 22, 2020 at 9:55 AM Alissa Cooper wrote: > Gyan, thanks for your review. Christoph, thanks for your response. I think > the intro in the draft is ok as-is. I entered a DISCUSS ballot with a > question about Section 7. > > Alissa > > > On Apr 17, 2020,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-11

2020-04-28 Thread Mohit Sethi M
HI Acee, On 4/24/20 3:38 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote: Hi Mohit, Speaking as document shepherd. See inline. On 4/24/20, 3:39 AM, "Mohit Sethi via Datatracker" wrote: Reviewer: Mohit Sethi Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-11

2020-04-28 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf