Hi Christer,
Thanks for your review. Replies/comments inline marked with .
We are working on an updated version of the draft to incorporate your comments
as well.
Thanks
Bala'zs
-Original Message-
From: Christer Holmberg via Datatracker
Sent: Sunday, March 15, 2020 11:29 AM
To: gen-art@
Hi Bala'zs,
Thank you for the reply and clarifications. I still have a question on Q2.
...
Q2:
>> The first line of the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction says:
>>
>> “This document describes the concepts needed by any DetNet data plane
specification…”
>>
>> What
Todd Herr writes:
> Having reviewed the comments, I'm wondering if perhaps the following draft
> rewrite of the Abstract section might be a first step to address many of
> the points raised?
I heartily endorse the sentiment behind this. I think there are some
minor improvements that could be mad
On Wednesday, April 15, 2020 10:32:32 PM EDT Dale R. Worley wrote:
> Todd Herr writes:
> > Having reviewed the comments, I'm wondering if perhaps the following draft
> > rewrite of the Abstract section might be a first step to address many of
> > the points raised?
>
> I heartily endorse the sent
On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM Scott Kitterman wrote:
> > I think you are very close to an Abstract/Introduction that is clearly
> > comprehensible to people who are not familiar with DMARC.
>
> Considering this is an extension to DMARC, I don't think that's the target
> audience.
>
As an indiv
On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 8:31 PM Seth Blank wrote:
> On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM Scott Kitterman
> wrote:
>
>> > I think you are very close to an Abstract/Introduction that is clearly
>> > comprehensible to people who are not familiar with DMARC.
>>
>> Considering this is an extension to DMAR
Apologies:
On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 8:39 PM Murray S. Kucherawy
wrote:
> +1. If even a small number of people (and the GenART review itself might
> be enough) thinks it's in need of this kind of improvement, I would be
> surprised if the IESG sends it back to the working group for revision. If
On April 16, 2020 3:30:59 AM UTC, Seth Blank wrote:
>On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM Scott Kitterman
>wrote:
>
>> > I think you are very close to an Abstract/Introduction that is
>clearly
>> > comprehensible to people who are not familiar with DMARC.
>>
>> Considering this is an extension to D
