Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-01

2016-10-12 Thread Gould, James
Robert, Thanks again for reviewing the draft and providing feedback. I reply to your replies below. — JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 VerisignInc.com > On Oct 11, 2016, at 12:00 PM, R

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-01

2016-10-12 Thread Robert Sparks
On 10/12/16 9:27 AM, Gould, James wrote: Robert, Thanks again for reviewing the draft and providing feedback. I reply to your replies below. — JG *James Gould *Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 VerisignInc.com

Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-12 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 10/12/16 12:55 AM, Eggert, Lars wrote: Hi, thanks for the review! On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat wrote: (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but it has been removed.) I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note. Sure. (2) NIT: unli

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-01

2016-10-12 Thread Gould, James
Robert, I posted draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-03 that incorporates the remainder of your feedback. Let me know if you find anything else. Thanks, — JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 VerisignInc.com <

Re: [Gen-art] IESG telechat Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-17

2016-10-12 Thread Jari Arkko
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09

2016-10-12 Thread Jari Arkko
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-01

2016-10-12 Thread Jari Arkko
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-core-etch-02

2016-10-12 Thread Jari Arkko
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-16

2016-10-12 Thread Peter Yee
Dino, Thanks for considering my comments. On the basis that each RTR RLOC can be from a different address family, than I would say that the number of RTRs cannot be determined from the LCAF Length field. The length alone would not tell you the breakdown of RTR RLOCs between th

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review for draft-ietf-lisp-crypto-09

2016-10-12 Thread Pete Resnick
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.i

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-17

2016-10-12 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For background on Gen-ART, ple