Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

2015-11-19 Thread Benoit Claise
Thank you Elwyn for your review. Regards, Benoit I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new v

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext-03

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Christer: thanks for your review. I agree with the thoughts in the latest sets of mails on what edits to make. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/ma

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption-03

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Christer: many thanks for you review! On 17 Nov 2015, at 21:57, Christer Holmberg wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > > Document:

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-09.txt

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Francis, many thanks for your detailed review! Markus et al: thank you for making edits. I have balloted no-obj for this document on today’s IESG telechat. Jari On 13 Nov 2015, at 11:30, Markus Stenberg wrote: > First of all, thanks for the review. > > Steven Barth already incorporated some

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-isis-route-preference-02

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Robert. Robert’s question was good, and your answer Les was spot. What I’m wondering is whether it would be useful to add something to the document about your answer, Les? Or at the very least, a reference to Appendix A from Section 2. And if you add something about trans

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6485bis-04

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Roni! Jari On 03 Nov 2015, at 20:04, Sandra Murphy wrote: > Reducing the cc list, since I don’t know if you intended a question below. > > Thanks for the review. > > On Oct 30, 2015, at 6:42 PM, Roni Even wrote: > >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> I assume that

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Many thanks for your detailed review, Elwyn! Much appreciated. (And congrats to the team for a quality document!) Jari On 14 Nov 2015, at 17:07, Elwyn Davies wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being pr

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
I think the explanation sounds reasonable too. Thanks. And many thanks to Brian for the review, and spotting important issues. Jari On 13 Nov 2015, at 07:51, Dhruv Dhody wrote: > Thanks Brian! > Thanks Pavan! > > Happy Diwali :) > > > > On Fri, Nov 13, 2015 at 11:16 AM, Brian E Carpenter

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks, all. Many thanks Joel for your review, and on focusing on key issues. Jari On 03 Nov 2015, at 06:17, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > Thank you. This addresses my concern. > Yours, > Joel > > On 11/2/15 11:14 PM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: >> Hi Julien, All, >> >> So now we have - (and thanks for be

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-isis-route-preference-02

2015-11-19 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Jari - Thanx for the comments. Inline. > -Original Message- > From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net] > Sent: Thursday, November 19, 2015 2:58 AM > To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > Cc: Robert Sparks; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-isis-route- > preference@ietf.org; i...@ietf

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2015-11-19

2015-11-19 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Brian Carpenter 2015-11-30 draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-tcp-keepalive-04 Christer Holmberg 2015-12-04 draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-extranet-04 I hav

Re: [Gen-art] Gen_ART review of draft-santesson-auth-context-extension-10

2015-11-19 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Jouni! (Authors, did you see this review - wanted to make sure no information is lost.) Jari On 16 Oct 2015, at 01:56, jouni korhonen wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >