Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-12

2022-05-25 Thread Lars Eggert
Dan, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2022-5-6, at 12:27, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Re

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-12

2022-05-12 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Hendrik, Thank you for addressing my (minor) concerns. The changes are fine with me. Regards, Dan On Wed, May 11, 2022 at 6:15 PM Brockhaus, Hendrik < hendrik.brockh...@siemens.com> wrote: > Dan > > Many thanks for your review. Please find my proposal below. > > > Von: Dan Romascanu via Da

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-12

2022-05-11 Thread Brockhaus, Hendrik
Dan Many thanks for your review. Please find my proposal below. > Von: Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > > Ready with nits. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. It would be useful to provide references for terms at first occurrence. For > example Section 2 directly mentions OOBCertHash, CertStat