[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-10

2015-06-29 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-10

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Some misunderstanding, I think. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist : ** The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section. (See Section 2.2 of http://www.ietf.org/id-info

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Uma Chunduri
Hi Brian, > However, note that an IANA Considerations section is always required, even if > it says that no IANA action is necessary. I removed this as per the guidance of Amanda (IANA). I am not sure it's always required. Amanda, could you please confirm on this? Thanks! -- Uma C. -Ori

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Brian E Carpenter
That looks fine (in the -06), thanks. However, note that an IANA Considerations section is always required, even if it says that no IANA action is necessary. Regards Brian Carpenter On 30/06/2015 08:38, Uma Chunduri wrote: > Hi Brian, > > Thanks for your consideration and for providing the m

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Uma Chunduri
Hi Brian, Thanks for your consideration and for providing the modified text quickly. That works and it's a great help. Shall update this in the next version. -- Uma C. -Original Message- From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, June 29, 2015 1:32 PM To

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Hi Uma, See below... On 30/06/2015 06:19, Uma Chunduri wrote: > Hi Brian, > > Thanks for your review (apologies for the delay from my side). > Response i-line [Uma]: > > -- > Uma C. > > -Original Message- > From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] > Sent: Friday, J

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

2015-06-29 Thread Uma Chunduri
Hi Brian, Thanks for your review (apologies for the delay from my side). Response i-line [Uma]: -- Uma C. -Original Message- From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] Sent: Friday, June 12, 2015 7:37 PM To: draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis@ietf.org; General Area Rev

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-authentication-11.txt

2015-06-29 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Hi Tiru, You have resolved many of my concerns. I raised a number of questions, and in many cases you responded with an explanation of how you intend for things to work. That is good - in most cases the answer makes sense to me. But my point in raising the questions was that I don't think the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-authentication-11.txt

2015-06-29 Thread Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy)
Hi Paul, Thanks for the detailed review. Please see inline > -Original Message- > From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu] > Sent: Saturday, June 27, 2015 2:32 AM > To: draft-ietf-pcp-authentication@tools.ietf.org > Cc: General Area Review Team > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call re