Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-28 Thread Warren Block
On Fri, 29 Nov 2013, Taras Korenko wrote: Updated version of the second patch follows. Looks good to me! P.S.: the funniest thing is that contents of users chapter was integrated into basics chapter in r42953, users chapter was removed (again r42953), and reappeared after db5 merg

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-28 Thread Taras Korenko
Updated version of the second patch follows. P.S.: the funniest thing is that contents of users chapter was integrated into basics chapter in r42953, users chapter was removed (again r42953), and reappeared after db5 merge, updated with new subchapter () still being excluded from the

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-28 Thread Warren Block
As before, notes marked with WB: below. On Thu, 28 Nov 2013, Taras Korenko wrote: ... and the last (previously unnoticed) chunk follows: Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml === --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handb

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-28 Thread Warren Block
On Thu, 28 Nov 2013, Taras Korenko wrote: There's a second lap, which includes received suggestions. One note: @@ -960,7 +957,7 @@ In this example, the argument to -m is a comma-delimited list of users who are to be added to the group. Unlike the previous example, these us

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-28 Thread Taras Korenko
... and the last (previously unnoticed) chunk follows: -- WBR, Taras Korenko Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml === --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (revision 43259) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/bo

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-27 Thread Taras Korenko
There's a second lap, which includes received suggestions. -- WBR, Taras Korenko Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml === --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (revision 43259) +++ en_US.ISO8859-

Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-27 Thread Warren Block
On Tue, 26 Nov 2013, Taras Korenko wrote: Good day, doc@ folks. I'd like to introduce some corrections to handbook/users chapter. However, there might be moot points, so any comments will be appreciated. Thanks. Thanks for working on this! Comments inline below, preceded with WB: for ea

en/handbook/users: proposed corrections

2013-11-26 Thread Taras Korenko
Good day, doc@ folks. I'd like to introduce some corrections to handbook/users chapter. However, there might be moot points, so any comments will be appreciated. Thanks. -- WBR, Taras Korenko Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml ===