Re: [Emu] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on charter-ietf-emu-05-02: (with COMMENT)

2019-12-05 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Mirja! > -Original Message- > From: iesg On Behalf Of Mirja Kühlewind via > Datatracker > Sent: Thursday, December 05, 2019 5:10 AM > To: The IESG > Cc: emu-cha...@ietf.org; emu@ietf.org > Subject: Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on charter-ietf-emu-05-02: (with > COMMENT) > > Mirja K

[Emu] AD review of draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-06

2020-01-15 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hello! I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-06 and this document is in good shape. Thanks for all of the work on it. I have minor questions and editorial nits which can be addressed with the IETF Last Call feedback. Minor: -- Can you revisit the history -- why was RFC4187 inf

[Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document is in good shape. I have largely editorial feedback below that can be handled with IETF LC input. (1) Section 1. Editorial. COMMENTs often come up in IESG review the it isn't clear up front what exactly is being

Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Alan! Thanks for the quick response. Since these are minor, I already started the IETF LC. Nevertheless, having an updated draft with these changes is even better. More inline ... > -Original Message- > From: Alan DeKok > Sent: Wednesday, May 13, 2020 5:12 PM > To: R

[Emu] AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-09

2020-05-28 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-09. Thanks for the work on modernizing existing guidance to cover TLS 1.3. Two high level things caught my attention: ** The abstract, introduction and title suggested to me that this document is only about TLS 1.3+EAP. If I wasn't usi

[Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptlscert-05

2020-10-14 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hello! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptlscert-05. This document is in good shape. Thanks for writing this practical guidance for operators and implementers. I have minor feedback below that can be addressed concurrently with IETF LC. Section 3. Editorial. s/A certificate ch

Re: [Emu] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eaptlscert-06: (with COMMENT)

2020-11-05 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Barry! > -Original Message- > From: iesg On Behalf Of Barry Leiba > Sent: Friday, October 30, 2020 10:17 AM > To: Mohit Sethi M > Cc: draft-ietf-emu-eaptlsc...@ietf.org; emu@ietf.org; The IESG > ; emu-cha...@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Emu] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-ea

Re: [Emu] Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-13: (with DISCUSS)

2021-01-07 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Rob! > -Original Message- > From: iesg On Behalf Of Robert Wilton via Datatracker > Sent: Tuesday, January 5, 2021 7:27 AM > To: The IESG > Cc: draft-ietf-emu-eap-tl...@ietf.org; j...@salowey.net; emu-cha...@ietf.org; > emu@ietf.org > Subject: Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-emu

[Emu] AD Review: draft-ietf-emu-noob-03

2021-03-07 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review on draft-ietf-emu-noob-03. Thanks for the work on this document -- in particular for providing copious examples in the Appendix; and co-developing this text with the implementations and the proofs. ** Section 3.2.3. Per "The OOB receiver MUST compare the received

Re: [Emu] AD Review: draft-ietf-emu-noob-03

2021-03-30 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Tuomas! Thanks for the inline explanation below and the new text in -04. This new content addresses my feedback so I advanced the document to IETF LC. Regards, Roman > -Original Message- > From: Aura Tuomas > Sent: Tuesday, March 16, 2021 9:17 AM > To: Roman Danyliw ;

[Emu] AD review on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-18

2021-07-29 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed a second AD review on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13. This time on -18. Thank you to the authors, the responsible co-chair, and the WG for all of the work to redesign the -13 protocol in response to the initial IESG review in December 2020. My review feedback consists of my own mi

[Emu] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-12: (with COMMENT)

2023-02-15 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-12: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer

[Emu] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-11: (with COMMENT)

2024-01-17 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-11: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to

[Emu] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-17: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2024-05-28 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-17: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to

[Emu] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-18: (with COMMENT)

2024-06-05 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-18: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to