Hello!
I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptlscert-05. This document is in
good shape. Thanks for writing this practical guidance for operators and
implementers. I have minor feedback below that can be addressed concurrently
with IETF LC.
Section 3. Editorial. s/A certificate chain .... can have 2 - 6 intermediate
certificates/A certificate chain ... can commonly have 2 - 6 intermediate
certificates/
Section 4.1.1. Editorial. s/1st/first/
Section 4.2.2. s/more strict/stricter/
Section 4.3. Editorial. s/Another second reason/Another reason/
Section 4.3. Per "unlimited communication from an unauthenticated device as
EAP could otherwise be use for bulk data transfer" doesn't parse - ("...
devices as EAP ...", also, is it that an unauthenticated devices can use
resources?)
Section 4.3. Would 100 round trips ensure that certificates chains as there
are currently deployed (in size) do not get dropped? I'm inquiring about the
basis of the 100 round-trip threshold.
Regards,
Roman
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