Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-28 Thread Alan DeKok
On Aug 26, 2023, at 3:47 PM, Alexander Clouter wrote: > I have read through the document and think it is "good to go", post nit > combing... Fixed, thanks. Alan DeKok. ___ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-28 Thread Alan DeKok
On Aug 27, 2023, at 10:42 AM, Heikki Vatiainen wrote: > Related to this, a closer look at the draft shows that at least the following > terms are used in interchangeable manner: Fixed thanks. Alan DeKok. ___ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https:/

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-28 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi Heikki Ok, so *I* let it soak for a few days ;-) and I'm comfortable with the wording. Eliot On 27.08.23 16:42, Heikki Vatiainen wrote: On Fri, 25 Aug 2023 at 22:30, Eliot Lear wrote: I agree with the sentiment, but I think it would be good for the words to soak a bit, since

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-27 Thread Alan DeKok
On Aug 27, 2023, at 10:42 AM, Heikki Vatiainen wrote: > The diff between RFC 7170 and the current draft may help with the proposed > change. I just noticed that 'EAP' was used more in the RFC than in the draft: Yes. 7170 referred to "inner EAP method" in many places, even when it mean "any

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-27 Thread Heikki Vatiainen
On Fri, 25 Aug 2023 at 22:30, Eliot Lear wrote: > I agree with the sentiment, but I think it would be good for the words > to soak a bit, since the paragraphs are a little involved. There may be > a simpler way to say the same thing. > The diff between RFC 7170 and the current draft may help wit

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-26 Thread Alexander Clouter
On Tue, 22 Aug 2023, at 15:57, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the EAP Method Update (EMU) > WG of the IETF. > >Title : Tunnel Extensible Authentication Protocol (

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-25 Thread Eliot Lear
I agree with the sentiment, but I think it would be good for the words to soak a bit, since the paragraphs are a little involved. There may be a simpler way to say the same thing. Eliot On 25.08.23 21:27, Alan DeKok wrote: On Aug 25, 2023, at 10:07 AM, Heikki Vatiainen wrote: I have one sm

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-25 Thread Alan DeKok
On Aug 25, 2023, at 10:07 AM, Heikki Vatiainen wrote: > I have one small suggestion. > ... > I've created a pull request that updates the 'EAP authentication' part to say > 'inner authentication' so that in case there's an inner method (perhaps > provisioning?) that's not EAP but that can prov

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-25 Thread Heikki Vatiainen
On Tue, 22 Aug 2023 at 17:57, wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the EAP Method Update > (EMU) > WG of the IETF. > >Title : Tunnel Extensible Authentication Protocol (TEAP) > Version 1 >

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-22 Thread Alan DeKok
On Aug 22, 2023, at 2:34 PM, Michael Richardson wrote: > I have updated the shepherd write-up. > I don't see any issues at that level now. The document is ready for AD > review I think. Thanks. I hope that with the level of detail we put into this, the additional reviews will be easier. A

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-22 Thread Michael Richardson
Alan DeKok wrote: > This draft addresses the final open issues. I've updated the github > repository to verify and close the open issues. I have updated the shepherd write-up. I don't see any issues at that level now. The document is ready for AD review I think. -- Michael Richards

Re: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-13.txt

2023-08-22 Thread Alan DeKok
This draft addresses the final open issues. I've updated the github repository to verify and close the open issues. The only remaining open issue is verify against the errata. I did that months ago, but haven't double-checked it recently. I very much wish for this document to be done, a