[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-11-29 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 29/11/2024 13:17, Colin Perkins wrote: Hi Megan, Happy with the changes so far. Regarding the || query: I actually think the use of helps readability, provided we can be sure it’s consistent. It’s not critical, but it helps. Colin +1 It helps, the render I see looks good. Gorry On

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-03 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 02/12/2024 18:26, Megan Ferguson wrote: Hi Michael and Gorry, We have compiled our changes in response to both Michael’s email below and Gorry’s message about the <> tagging (see the 9621 email thread) in our postings below. Just a few notes: 1) Please review our updates to remove <> as su

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-06 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 06/12/2024 12:37, Brian Trammell (IETF) wrote: I’d prefer to update the running title to “Transport Services Architecture” to reflect the other documents. We debated this in some detail earlier and arrived at: Architecture and Requirements for Transport Services I'm just asking why we nee

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-06 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 06/12/2024 12:47, Brian Trammell (IETF) wrote: Not the document title, the short / footer title (which currently reads TAPS Architecture). Aha. Yes, I strongly agree with THAT proposal to change " On 6 Dec 2024, at 13:43, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: On 06/12/2024 12:37, Brian Trammell (IETF)

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-09 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
Dear RFC-Ed, Please note that the following issues relating to Arch were not dealt with in the cluster answer sent to the RFC Editor, but specifically relate to improving consistency with draft-ietf-taps-arch: 1. Could you please add this definition to the ARCH draft to be consistent with ot

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: ...: Comments for 9621

2024-12-28 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 27/12/2024 15:13, Anna Brunström wrote: Hi again, Below are a few details for -arch. With the changes below, I approve the document. BR, Anna OLD: Instead, it provides the Protocol Stack with additional information to allow it to make better use of modern Transport Services, while simplif

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-10 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
Dear RFC-Ed/Megan, Sorry - to get back with more Cluser-wide inspired changes to draft-ietf-taps-arch. The following issues have merged as requests: 1. Could you please add the following definition to the ARCH draft to be consistent with other I-Ds in this cluster which use this list for def

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-13 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
Megan/RFC-Ed, As an author, I'd now like to add my APPROVAL for RFC9621. I think this is now ready. Best wishes, Gorry On 09/12/2024 19:29, Megan Ferguson wrote: Yes! That was my thought, but I could not locate it! I have updated the AUTH48 status page of 9622 to reflect this (https://www.

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-06 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
Please see  below: On 06/12/2024 18:48, Megan Ferguson wrote: Hi Colin, Thanks for pointing this out. We have folded this change into our current version of the files (see below). Perhaps I am missing it, but I *think* we haven’t seen a response to this question from a previous mail: 2) Re

[auth48] Re: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9754 for your review

2025-03-20 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 21/03/2025 02:02, Rebecca VanRheenen wrote: Hi Tom and Gorry*, *Gorry - As AD, please review and approve the following changes. These are best viewed in this diff file:https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48diff.html. 1) Added paragraph in Section 5; it’s the fourth paragraph (au

[auth48] Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9743 for your review

2025-03-01 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
Thanks for doing this - It is good to get this precise as a BCP, and we have replies to your questions (see below), and also a few extra requests. Martin and I have coordinated, but he'll chime-in if there any additional requests. Best wishes, Gorry --- Authors and *AD, While reviewing thi

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9743 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
I was performing a final check and noted one mistake by me that needs to be corrected (so sorry). ORIGINAL (as sent to RFC-Ed): A congestion control algorithm shouldtry to avoid causing excessively high rates of packet loss. CURRENT (as suggested by me): A congestion control algorithm ought

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9743 for your review

2025-03-11 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
On 05/03/2025 18:56, Megan Ferguson wrote: Hi Gorry, Thanks for sending this along. We have added this change to our versions of the files (see below). Please review our update (as your description of the update was to change one word but the “New” text actually changed more than one word) a