On 21/03/2025 02:02, Rebecca VanRheenen wrote:
Hi Tom and Gorry*,
*Gorry - As AD, please review and approve the following changes. These are best
viewed in this diff
file:https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48diff.html.
1) Added paragraph in Section 5; it’s the fourth paragraph (author comment: "We
missed the following paragraph in what we submitted. It has undergone review within
the WG.”)
2) Added text in Section 5.2 (author comment: "And likewise we missed including
the flags above. Two implementations had them, but a third one (which arrived after
we sent the document out to the RFC Editors did not.) This has undergone the WG
vetting process.”)
3) Added “MUST” in third paragraph of Section 5 (to correspond with “MUST”
earlier in sentence)
Tom - Thank you for responding to our questions and for updating the xml file with the list in the
Definitions section. We created a test file that uses <ul> rather than <dl> for this list; see
below. Do you have a preference for one of these formats (i.e., <dl> or <ul>)? We’re happy to
make the change if you prefer <ul>.
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.html#name-definitions
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.pdf
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.xml
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.pdf
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.html
Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48diff.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
Diff files showing all changes:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-diff.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9754
Thank you,
RFC Editor/rv
I understand that the major changes were reviewed within the WG.
I approve this version.
Gorry
(WIT AD)
On Mar 17, 2025, at 8:39 PM, Thomas Haynes<log...@hammerspace.com> wrote:
Hi,
Please find attached my responses to the questions asked in the draft and some
changes that came in after we sent the document to the RFC Editors.
Thanks,
Tom
On Mar 18, 2025, at 4:26 AM,rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
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RFC9754 (draft-ietf-nfsv4-delstid-08)
Title : Extending the Opening of Files in NFSv4.2
Author(s) : T. Haynes, T. Myklebust
WG Chair(s) : Brian Pawlowski, Christopher Inacio
Area Director(s) : Zaheduzzaman Sarker, Francesca Palombini
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