Some more. "Development" page:
"The proclaimed mission is" => "Our mission is" Let's be consistent with "create" vs "creating". It's different here from the main page. I think "creating" is better. In the enumerated list, I would prefer n-dashes (–) instead of hyphens. "There is the IRC channel" => "There is an IRC channel" "Sage uses several techniques to continually improve overall software quality:" => "We take code quality seriously:" On the search page, I find the list of examples a bit confusing. It looks like a list of headings for different types of searches you can perform. "Acknowledgements" page: "Developing Sage benefited from financial support of numerous institutions and the work of many developers of included components." => "Sage development has benefited from the financial support of numerous institutions, and the previous (and ongoing) work of many authors of included components". "Acknowledgment for Supporting Sage" sound weird to me. "Financial and Infrastructure Support" => "Financial and infrastructure support". I'm not sure if infrastructure is the right word. Can't quite think of the right word now. Maybe "material". Not sure. Map: "Sage Developers around the World" => "Sage Developers around the world", or even "Sage developers around the world" Back to the main page: "search Sage related websites" => "search Sage-related websites" david --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
