Rich, 

Got it. Change the wording per your suggestion in the next revision. 

Thank you. 
Linda


-----Original Message-----
From: Salz, Rich <[email protected]> 
Sent: Monday, September 2, 2024 4:18 PM
To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>; [email protected]
Cc: [email protected]; 
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Subject: Re: Artart last call review of 
draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41

> In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't 
> think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list 
> of terms?

I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well.

Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document"

I was surprised to see definitions for "commonly used terms" :)

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