Rich, Got it. Change the wording per your suggestion in the next revision.
Thank you. Linda -----Original Message----- From: Salz, Rich <rs...@akamai.com> Sent: Monday, September 2, 2024 4:18 PM To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dun...@futurewei.com>; a...@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement....@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; rtgwg@ietf.org Subject: Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41 > In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't > think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list > of terms? I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well. Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document" I was surprised to see definitions for "commonly used terms" :) _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list -- rtgwg@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to rtgwg-le...@ietf.org
