Hi Ketan, all, FWIW, I sent right now a message to netmod that is triggered by the discussion we had: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/netmod/Rjpgap-Tzy81DAweY0kYosF9Jf0/.
Cheers, Med De : Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]> Envoyé : mercredi 4 juin 2025 09:13 À : [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Cc : rtg-bfd@ietf. org <[email protected]>; ops-ads <[email protected]> Objet : AD review follow-up for YANG organization related aspects for the 3 BFD documents Hello Authors, I got myself educated (a little bit) on the YANG modeling guidelines as part of the IESG review of https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis/ Following are some YANG organization specific comments on each of the 3 documents. 1) For draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers a) https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bfd-optimizing-authentication-24.html#section-6.1 has to be moved from that document into the IANA considerations of this document. This IANA registry feeds into an IANA maintained YANG module that needs to be self-contained in this document where those two types are actually specified. 2) For draft-ietf-bfd-optimizing-authentication a) The following sections need to be deleted (i.e., they have no place in any of these documents) because they refer to an IANA maintained YANG module https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bfd-optimizing-authentication-24.html#section-6.4 https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bfd-optimizing-authentication-24.html#name-updated-bfd-iana-module b) For the YANG Model in https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bfd-optimizing-authentication-24.html#section-5.3 there are two options: i) It can be split so the main part related to optimized auth remains in this document and the part specific to the two ISAAC auth types is moved into draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers. IMHO this would be the correct and modular way to develop YANG modules. OR ii) It can be moved entirely into draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers to avoid the circular normative reference between these two drafts. This will also better align with (1) (a). I believe this is what Reshad was suggesting. 3) For draft-ietf-bfd-stability - all seems good to me from YANG perspective Please let me know your thoughts and if you agree, it would be great to get some draft updates posted so we can start closing off review comments. Thanks, Ketan ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
