Dear Carlos, thank you for the suggested update. I agree that it improves the text. Will include in the working version of the draft for now.
Regards, Greg On Mon, May 25, 2020 at 6:15 PM Carlos Pignataro (cpignata) < cpign...@cisco.com> wrote: > Thank you, Greg. > > I only looked at the update to the last paragraph of Section 6. > > Reading through the last paragraph of Section 6, the text is not fully > clear. There are a few nits, including a missing article, /as long as/as > well as/, /is/are/, and missing preposition which results in an incorrect > pointer. > > I’d suggest, for your consideration: > > OLD: > Validation of TTL / Hop Limit of the inner IP packet, as long as the > related considerations for BFD control packet demultiplexing and > authentication, is performed as described in Section 5 [RFC5881]. > > > OLD: > Validation of the TTL / Hop Limit field of the inner IP packet, as > well as the related considerations for BFD control packet > demultiplexing and authentication, are performed as described in > Section 5 of [RFC5881]. > > Best, > > Carlos. > > 2020/05/25 午後6:11、Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>のメール: > > Dear Carlos, > thank you for your comments and suggestions. I hope that the updated > version of the draft addresses your comments. Please let me know whether > I've captured them all correctly. > > Dear Jeff and Reshad, > I believe that all action points from the IESG reviews and discussions are > reflected in the current version. I much appreciate your consideration and > suggestion on the next steps to progress this document. > > Regards, > Greg > > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org> > Date: Mon, May 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > To: Sudarsan Paragiri <sudarsan....@gmail.com>, Mallik Mudigonda < > mmudi...@cisco.com>, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>, Vengada Prasad > Govindan <vengg...@cisco.com>, Santosh Pallagatti < > santosh.pallaga...@gmail.com> > > > > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > has been successfully submitted by Greg Mirsky and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan > Revision: 12 > Title: BFD for VXLAN > Document date: 2020-05-25 > Group: bfd > Pages: 11 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/ > Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12 > Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan > Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12 > > Abstract: > This document describes the use of the Bidirectional Forwarding > Detection (BFD) protocol in point-to-point Virtual eXtensible Local > Area Network (VXLAN) tunnels used to form an overlay network. > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > The IETF Secretariat > > > >
