Thank you, Greg. I only looked at the update to the last paragraph of Section 6.
Reading through the last paragraph of Section 6, the text is not fully clear. There are a few nits, including a missing article, /as long as/as well as/, /is/are/, and missing preposition which results in an incorrect pointer. I’d suggest, for your consideration: OLD: Validation of TTL / Hop Limit of the inner IP packet, as long as the related considerations for BFD control packet demultiplexing and authentication, is performed as described in Section 5 [RFC5881]. OLD: Validation of the TTL / Hop Limit field of the inner IP packet, as well as the related considerations for BFD control packet demultiplexing and authentication, are performed as described in Section 5 of [RFC5881]. Best, Carlos. > 2020/05/25 午後6:11、Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>のメール: > > Dear Carlos, > thank you for your comments and suggestions. I hope that the updated version > of the draft addresses your comments. Please let me know whether I've > captured them all correctly. > > Dear Jeff and Reshad, > I believe that all action points from the IESG reviews and discussions are > reflected in the current version. I much appreciate your consideration and > suggestion on the next steps to progress this document. > > Regards, > Greg > > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> > Date: Mon, May 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > To: Sudarsan Paragiri <sudarsan....@gmail.com > <mailto:sudarsan....@gmail.com>>, Mallik Mudigonda <mmudi...@cisco.com > <mailto:mmudi...@cisco.com>>, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com > <mailto:gregimir...@gmail.com>>, Vengada Prasad Govindan <vengg...@cisco.com > <mailto:vengg...@cisco.com>>, Santosh Pallagatti > <santosh.pallaga...@gmail.com <mailto:santosh.pallaga...@gmail.com>> > > > > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > has been successfully submitted by Greg Mirsky and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan > Revision: 12 > Title: BFD for VXLAN > Document date: 2020-05-25 > Group: bfd > Pages: 11 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt > <https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt> > Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/ > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/> > Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12> > Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan> > Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12 > <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12> > > Abstract: > This document describes the use of the Bidirectional Forwarding > Detection (BFD) protocol in point-to-point Virtual eXtensible Local > Area Network (VXLAN) tunnels used to form an overlay network. > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org > <http://tools.ietf.org/>. > > The IETF Secretariat > >
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