Hi Reshad, et.al,
I've uploaded the new version of the draft:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Bidirectional Forwarding Detection WG
of the IETF.
Title : BFD for Multipoint Networks
Authors : Dave Katz
Dave Ward
Santosh Pallagatti
Greg Mirsky
Filename : draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-13.txt
Pages : 18
Date : 2018-01-30
Abstract:
This document describes extensions to the Bidirectional Forwarding
Detection (BFD) protocol for its use in multipoint and multicast
networks.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-13
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-13
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-13
Will respond to your comments on the Active Tails shortly.
Regards,
Greg
On Mon, Jan 29, 2018 at 11:47 AM, Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
<rrah...@cisco.com> wrote:
> Greg, these changes are good with me.
>
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> Regards,
>
> Reshad.
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>
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> From: Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>
> Date: Monday, January 29, 2018 at 1:04 PM
> To: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrah...@cisco.com>
> Cc: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpign...@cisco.com>, Jeffrey Haas
> <jh...@pfrc.org>, "rtg-bfd@ietf.org" <rtg-bfd@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)
>
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> Hi Reshad,
>
> nits fixed and the new text below:
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> OLD TEXT
>
> A number of values of the state variable are added to the base BFD…
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> NEW TEXT
>
> A number of new values of the state variable bfd.SessionType are added to
> the base BFD…
>
> Would you accept this update?
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>
>
> Regards,
>
> Greg
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 29, 2018 at 5:52 AM, Reshad Rahman (rrahman) <rrah...@cisco.com>
> wrote:
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> Hi Greg,
>
>
>
> Section 4.2. s/The head has a session of type MultipointHead Section 4.4.1/
> The head has a session of type MultipointHead, as defined in Section 4.4.1,
> /
> Section 4.4.1. “A number of values of the state variable are added to the
> base BFD…”. That sentence needs rewording IMO but maybe I’m just missing
> what it’s trying to convey.
> Section 4.6. s/Active role , / Active role, /
> Section 4.10. “MUST send packets with P bit set.”. Did we agree on “MUST
> send packets with the P bit set.”?
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> Regards,
>
> Reshad.
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> <snip>
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