Hi David,

We, the authors, are aware of this feedback and would be addressing it soon.

Thanks,
Jasdip

From: David Dong via RT <drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org>
Date: Thursday, February 27, 2025 at 1:55 PM
To:
Cc: regext@ietf.org <regext@ietf.org>, 
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<draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search....@ietf.org>
Subject: [IANA #1413017] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search 
(link-relations)
Dear Authors/Chairs/ADs

Please see below for comments from the expert.

Best regards,

David Dong
IANA Services Sr. Specialist

On Tue Feb 18 19:54:52 2025, david.dong wrote:
> Dear Authors/Chairs/ADs
>
> Please see below for comments from the expert.
>
> Best regards,
>
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
>
> On Sun Feb 16 08:28:46 2025, m...@mnot.net wrote:
> > David et al,
> >
> > Section 10.2 has a title of "Link Relations Registry" but the URL
> > given is "https://www.iana.org/assignments/rdap-extensions/
> >  rdap-extensions.xhtml" -- it looks like the intent is to register
> > link relations given the content of the entries, so the URL needs to
> > be corrected.
> >
> > Assuming that's the case, I see that 'up' is already registered, so
> > that registration is not necessary.
> >
> > Both that and the remaining requests are extremely generic terms, and
> > so aren't appropriate to register in a specific protocol's document;
> > experience shows that doing so misleads readers to believe that these
> > terms are specific to that protocol and not useable elsewhere.
> >
> > Instead, I'd suggest registering them in a separate, standalone
> > document, using generic descriptions that are broadly applicable; your
> > document can then refine their semantics in a specific context. I
> > suspect the HTTPAPI WG would be amenable to such work.
> >
> > Alternatively, you could register link relation types specific to your
> > application; for example, "rdap-up" and so forth.
> >
> > I also notice that you define compound link relation types, e.g., "up-
> > active" and "top-active". Consider defining a separate "active"
> > relation type (again, either generically, or specific to your
> > application, depending on your preferences), which can then be used in
> > combination with other types -- e.g., "top active" and "up active".
> >
> > Cheers,
> >
> >
> >
> > On 15 Feb 2025, at 3:23 pm, David Dong via RT <drafts-expert-review-
> > comm...@iana.org> wrote:
> > >
> > >
> > > Dear Mark Nottingham, Julian Reschke, Jan Algermissen (cc: regext
> > > WG),
> > >
> > > As the designated experts for the Link Relation Types registry, can
> > > you review the proposed registrations in draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-
> > > search-14 for us? Please see:
> > >
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search/
> > >
> > > The due date is February 28th.
> > >
> > > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
> > > we'll make the registrations at:
> > >
> > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/link-relations/
> > >
> > > Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewer, we’ll act on the
> > > first response we receive.
> > >
> > > With thanks,
> > >
> > > David Dong
> > > IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> >
> > --
> > Mark Nottingham   https://www.mnot.net/
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