Section 5 already identifies the practices as observed or not, but we can add 
clarity by splitting it into two sections. We can also update the abstract. 
Thanks for the feedback.

Scott

> -----Original Message-----
> From: kowa...@denic.de <kowa...@denic.de>
> Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2024 12:03 PM
> To: Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenb...@verisign.com>; regext@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] Re: WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-
> 03
>
> Hi Scott,
>
> Splitting Section 5 into "Current Practices" and "Proposed experimental
> Practices" would offer a lot of more clarity in this respect.
>
> Also abstract is not mentioning proposed practices:
>
> "This document describes best practices to delete domain and host objects
> that reduce the risk of DNS resolution failure and maintain client-server data
> consistency."
>
> I would change to:
> "This document describes best current practices as well as proposes new
> experimental practices to delete domain and host objects that reduce the risk
> of DNS resolution failure and maintain client-server data consistency.
>
> Kind Regards,
>
> Pawel
>
> On 18.06.24 17:46, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:
> > Pawel, the document already describes known practices, their issues, and
> those that are proposed, along with analysis of how they're thought to be
> better. What's missing?
> >
> > Scott
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: kowa...@denic.de <kowa...@denic.de>
> >> Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2024 11:36 AM
> >> To: regext@ietf.org
> >> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Re: WGLC:
> >> draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-03
> >>
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> In the course of the actual discussion on the clarity of documents we
> >> produce, especially related to implementation maturity of the
> >> solutions I would need to repeat the remark I brought up during the call 
> >> for
> adoption [1].
> >>
> >> I think the document, being a BCP, should be very specific about
> >> which methods have already been field proven and which are kind of
> >> experimental with unknown implementation or operational impact.
> >>
> >> [1]
> >> https://secure-web.cisco.com/1WmRFtKB8RXzAHuXHoN-OpHA3vOlG-
> >>
> G0Gpki1ow4L_ezX0s3WaHnOjI1vjfr3mJJj49Wx2QArJxHz_7WstL3WUkGvQXd
> >> O_QI2Mxh_wKKA9UvoWj_UJUlybSsh9WVIQK4h2Hcc-
> >>
> LRehJ7_1E2xmP1iH5FpdEdMxrN2CGNIlFnFVDNyoiPSKZ_xANApbBjCnW1gXU
> >> pEpbFO4TVSXTFbYeTzWmJT3PHkqzw4dmncdVrCbGbV8b99WCfG2c-
> >>
> ahrgqfi1TBuravVfcBrC61Q9oNp2QGP5FzDQ9hbP2gAR93uA0CSo/https%3A
> >>
> %2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Fregext%2FlDkYhEak6_JehglG
> >> -YuqxBpwgrw%2F
> >>
> >> Kind Regards,
> >>
> >> Pawel
> >>
> >> On 03.06.24 16:56, James Galvin wrote:
> >>> The document editors have indicated that the following document is
> >>> ready
> >> for submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Best
> >> Current
> >> Practice:
> >>> Best Practices for Deletion of Domain and Host Objects in the
> >>> Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
> >>> https://secure-
> >> web.cisco.com/1kPqjqwCJfsCxQHvBeBU74pCSqzTWdJQ6jZ6RQm7-
> >>
> 2mcVf8pmghWjgEJRqVdkFppbs7M_HiHAE7CVQJzMEmDrBQgrLJGI5WUGwC
> >> 1rsVWeoAzVgC
> >>
> MgBrz_tOOZZ_yWsmaNrvKsCiYCAcKk34iXfGeMuD9YljauXP4IJOs_ATrkUln1aa
> >> Ezd61l
> >>
> pawefS7VAbs77M4BMKMb1NWfX_heCB1wqcD1HYXnSkD203cWebWfQKgj
> >> 5C8DWHYMuKHwud
> >>
> dFtPJJaxGWQA_qb0xjiiL9S3sLb2CbefBMEsC2aAwis4YLx2E/https%3A%2F%2F
> >> datatr
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