Thanks Andy - I have addressed these issues in draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-12 which was just published.
G. > On 10 Jun 2024, at 13:52, Andrew Newton (andy) <a...@hxr.us> wrote: > > Hi all, > > As document shepherd, the chairs have asked me to confirm on this list that > all comment received during WGLC, including the DNSDIR comments, have been > addressed and to confirm on the list that all changes from #08 to #11 are not > material. > > I note that the following editorial changes from James Gould are not > reflected in the current document, probably due to other edits in these areas > during WGLC. In my opinion, these editorial edits are helpful and I suggest > they be added when next this document is revised. > > Item 1: > > Text in 1.2.1.2.1 paragraph 3, proposed by James Gould: > > CURRENT: > > A server which implements host objects which receives a command which > attempts to set TTL values for A and AAAA records on a domain object MUST > respond with a 2004 "Parameter value range" error. > > PROPOSED: > > A server supporting host objects which receives a command that attempts to > set TTL values for A and AAAA records on a domain object MUST respond with a > 2004 "Parameter value range" error. > > Item 2: > > Text in 2.1.1.1 paragraph 1, James Gould proposed quoting the word "policy". > Additionally, the phrase "EPP response contain MUST contain" should probably > be "EPP response MUST contain". > > Item 3: > > Text in 2.1.1.2 paragraph 1, same issue as Item 2. > > > > Regarding material changes, I note the following in Section 5.2 of the > additional sentence to the end of paragraph 2: > > > The latency between receipt of the <update> command and the actual > publication of the changes in the DNS should also be taken into consideration > in this calculation. > > > As this sentence nor this section contain normative language, in my opinion > this is not a material change. > > > -andy > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org -- Gavin Brown Principal Engineer, Global Domains & Strategy Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) https://www.icann.org _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org
