Hi Marc,

Thanks, I just had a look at the diff. I have one further point to follow up on.

> On Jan 25, 2022, at 5:22 PM, Marc Blanchet <marc.blanc...@viagenie.ca> wrote:
> 
>> Le 1 déc. 2021 à 21:05, John Scudder via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> a 
>> écrit :
[…trimmed…]
>> 3. In §5.3 you write,
>> 
>>                                                             The array
>>  always contains two AS numbers represented in decimal format
>> 
>> Don’t you mean, “each array element always contains…“? Also, it appears what 
>> it
>> really contains is two ASNs *separated by a hyphen*.
> 
> <MB>Yes.</MB>

05 still has the text as quoted above. I’m not sure if that was deliberate, or 
an oversight. In case it wasn’t clear, I was suggesting something along these 
lines: 

OLD:
   served by the base RDAP URLs found in the second element.  The array
   always contains two AS numbers represented in decimal format that
   represents the range of AS numbers between the two elements of the
   array, where values are in increasing order (e.g. 100-200, not
   200-100).  A single AS number is represented as a range of two

NEW:
   served by the base RDAP URLs found in the second element.  Each
   element of the array
   contains two AS numbers represented in decimal format, 
   separated by a hyphen, that
   represents the range of AS numbers between the two AS numbers
   (inclusive), where values are in increasing order (e.g. 100-200, not
   200-100).  A single AS number is represented as a range of two

(While I was at it I changed “between the two elements of the array”, which I 
think was just wrong, and added “inclusive”.)

If the text in 05 is exactly the way you want it, that’s OK, I think that for 
practical purposes the ambiguity is unlikely to be a problem, especially given 
the example (which is what I relied on to understand the meaning). I’m just 
pointing this out in case it was an oversight.

Regards,

—John
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