Hi Erik, Thank you for your feedback!
We have addressed both raised issues (please see inline) and updated our GitHub repository (https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt). Hope that is fine for you. We will do the update along with the other changes raised when we are asked to do the update. Best, Tobias > On 25. Sep 2021, at 01:01, Erik Kline via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > [S3.3, nit] > > * Seems like the <maint:impact> text could be phrased in terms of > expectations for the impact, i.e. > > "If access is expected to be {intermittently unavailable, > completely unavailable, > unaffected}, ..." > > > (give that things can go from "none" to "full" unexpectedly =). TS: We changed the wording. > > [S3.3, question] > > * For the <maint:environment> type attribute values, the meanings of > most are immediately obvious to me except for "ote". Assuming this > means "Operational Test and Evaluation", or something similar, > perhaps expand/explain this? > > ("ote" does not appear in the RFC Editor's list of abbreviations.) > > TS: Yes, ote stands for "Operational Test and Evaluation”. We added a clarification under S1.1. > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list > regext@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext