Thank you Scott for the prompt reply and action ;-)

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: iesg <iesg-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of "Hollenbeck, Scott" 
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Date: Thursday, 18 February 2021 at 16:57
To: Eric Vyncke <evyn...@cisco.com>, "i...@ietf.org" <i...@ietf.org>
Cc: "regext-cha...@ietf.org" <regext-cha...@ietf.org>, 
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Subject: RE:  Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-04: 
(with COMMENT)

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    [SAH] [snip]

    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > COMMENT:
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    >
    > Thank you for the work put into this document. Due to lack of time, I only
    > quickly browsed through this document but I appreciate the use of many
    > IPv6 examples.
    >
    > Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would
    > be appreciated).
    >
    > I hope that this helps to improve the document,
    >
    > Regards,
    >
    > -éric
    >
    > == COMMENTS ==
    >
    > -- Section 1.1 --
    > As noticed by others, please use BCP14 template.

    [SAH] Will fix.

    > -- Section 5.4 --
    > Please do not use a non-example network as in "https://secure-
    > web.cisco.com/1QswU1suz5xazzQtNjt9gwzjLQly6E6PuEmxlu503qEHsSGrDO
    > UwgEcC9JdKIAVYtNu9i6pQH3ukU1F4ekHvoH9X1pxAel6zKuKg9Hmcw7Trwob
    > hUP8isZ9VxpRTiivAj25tgtxHHhhV1zr_hXEB4Bn2mHZQjVf17K3PKz12Ts9Yb7w
    > bo4Jv52QOiRuivEUUtFttK3qpLK4fWPzNP-Sql3bhPctQg8exFUB8Pm_yA7CEL-
    > CtwZ-j-
    > 8rSlle1JIFud/https%3A%2F%2Fexample.net%2Fip%2F2001%3Ac00%3A%3A%
    > 2F23" but rather "https://secure-
    > web.cisco.com/1c0bWNcOJT9LXARbKDznoq1ZcUAho_RYe2dTelnYTtLpAYMrb
    > wSKvvbbjtI6GNquv3zpY7NBx6Eoi9teJiVIwA8FPXYCqIHfZQwfpQ2uTwTD-
    > AXIk0OxzF_HqVKIB4OaMz9qskobLwFq7KrpWKeN6A0FpIfNFfirD4mkkmN9kR
    > eDD8mxCtA3vr0zRnUZaMaRgswCU8179QgA5o0dOMP-
    > gnY5IsyvcKtdgHlbfrGpfCr3tjXel1FT1EfUPwZEQ-
    > FLx/https%3A%2F%2Fexample.net%2Fip%2F2001%3Adb8%3A%3A%2F32"

    [SAH] Will fix (sorry for the security appliance URL mangling).

    Scott

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