> -----Original Message----- > From: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > Sent: Thursday, February 18, 2021 9:53 AM > To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> > Cc: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483...@ietf.org; regext-cha...@ietf.org; > regext@ietf.org; Jasdip Singh <jasd...@arin.net>; jasd...@arin.net > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext- > rfc7483bis-04: (with COMMENT) > > Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not click > links > or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content > is safe. > > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-04: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.)
[SAH] [snip] > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for the work put into this document. Due to lack of time, I only > quickly browsed through this document but I appreciate the use of many > IPv6 examples. > > Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would > be appreciated). > > I hope that this helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > == COMMENTS == > > -- Section 1.1 -- > As noticed by others, please use BCP14 template. [SAH] Will fix. > -- Section 5.4 -- > Please do not use a non-example network as in "https://secure- > web.cisco.com/1QswU1suz5xazzQtNjt9gwzjLQly6E6PuEmxlu503qEHsSGrDO > UwgEcC9JdKIAVYtNu9i6pQH3ukU1F4ekHvoH9X1pxAel6zKuKg9Hmcw7Trwob > hUP8isZ9VxpRTiivAj25tgtxHHhhV1zr_hXEB4Bn2mHZQjVf17K3PKz12Ts9Yb7w > bo4Jv52QOiRuivEUUtFttK3qpLK4fWPzNP-Sql3bhPctQg8exFUB8Pm_yA7CEL- > CtwZ-j- > 8rSlle1JIFud/https%3A%2F%2Fexample.net%2Fip%2F2001%3Ac00%3A%3A% > 2F23" but rather "https://secure- > web.cisco.com/1c0bWNcOJT9LXARbKDznoq1ZcUAho_RYe2dTelnYTtLpAYMrb > wSKvvbbjtI6GNquv3zpY7NBx6Eoi9teJiVIwA8FPXYCqIHfZQwfpQ2uTwTD- > AXIk0OxzF_HqVKIB4OaMz9qskobLwFq7KrpWKeN6A0FpIfNFfirD4mkkmN9kR > eDD8mxCtA3vr0zRnUZaMaRgswCU8179QgA5o0dOMP- > gnY5IsyvcKtdgHlbfrGpfCr3tjXel1FT1EfUPwZEQ- > FLx/https%3A%2F%2Fexample.net%2Fip%2F2001%3Adb8%3A%3A%2F32" [SAH] Will fix (sorry for the security appliance URL mangling). Scott _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
