Just to let you know, we will prepare a new version (07) because we forgot to change <maint:host> as discussed, and do a review before submitting it.
Tobias > On 8. Dec 2020, at 09:08, Tobias Sattler <satt...@united-domains.de> wrote: > > Hi Jim, > > We addressed your feedback and submitted the new version. > > Thanks, > Tobias > >> On 1. Dec 2020, at 15:58, Tobias Sattler <satt...@united-domains.de >> <mailto:satt...@united-domains.de>> wrote: >> >> Hi Jim, >> >> Thank you for your swift feedback. >> >> We will go through it and make the adjustments where needed. >> >> Best, >> Tobias >> >>> On 1. Dec 2020, at 15:35, Gould, James >>> <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org >>> <mailto:jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: >>> >>> In reviewing draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05, below is my >>> feedback: >>> >>> Replace “defnition” with “definition” in two places. >>> Section 2.3 Maintenance Elements >>> I would modify the description of the <maint:item> element. Specifically, >>> change the second sentence to read like “This element is used in a >>> maintenance item EPP <info> response and <poll> message.”. >>> Section 3.1.3.1 “Query one maintenance item” >>> The name “Query one maintenance item” could be shortened to “Info >>> Maintenance Item”. >>> I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance Item command element >>> (<maint:id>) without making the reference to Section 2.3, since Section 2.3 >>> defines the Info Maintenance Item Response. >>> The command example incorrectly references >>> <maint:impact>blackout</maint:impact> instead of >>> <maint:impact>full</maint:impact>. >>> The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates >>> (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) >>> I would define the response similar to: >>> i. When >>> an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> >>> element MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the >>> maintenance namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the >>> <maint:item> element defined in Section 2.3. >>> Section 3.1.3.2 “Query maintenance list” >>> The name could be updated to “Info Maintenance List”. >>> I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance List element >>> (<maint:list/>), which is an empty element to indicate an Info Maintenance >>> List command. >>> The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates >>> (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) >>> I would define the response similar to: >>> i. When >>> an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> >>> element MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the >>> maintenance namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the >>> <maint:list> element with a list of <maint:listItem> elements. The >>> <maint:listItem> element contains the following child elements: >>> 1. <maint:id>: <maint:id> defined in Section 2.3. >>> 2. <maint:start>: <maint:start> defined in Section 2.3. >>> 3. <maint:end>: <maint:end> defined in Section 2.3. >>> 4. <maint:crDate>: <maint:crDate> defined in Section 2.3. >>> 5. <maint:upDate>: OPTIONAL <maint:upDate> defined in Section 2.3. >>> Sect 3.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command” >>> The dates in the poll response example should be updated to more recent >>> dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) >>> >>> -- >>> >>> JG >>> >>> >>> >>> James Gould >>> Fellow Engineer >>> jgo...@verisign.com <mailto:jgo...@verisign.com> >>> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com >>> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com>> >>> >>> 703-948-3271 >>> 12061 Bluemont Way >>> Reston, VA 20190 >>> >>> Verisign.com <http://verisign.com/> <http://verisigninc.com/ >>> <http://verisigninc.com/>> >>> >>> On 12/1/20, 7:32 AM, "regext on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org >>> <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>" <regext-boun...@ietf.org >>> <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org >>> <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> wrote: >>> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >>> directories. >>> This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG >>> of the IETF. >>> >>> Title : Registry Maintenance Notifications for the >>> Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) >>> Authors : Tobias Sattler >>> Roger Carney >>> Jody Kolker >>> Filename : >>> draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05.txt >>> Pages : 20 >>> Date : 2020-12-01 >>> >>> Abstract: >>> This document describes an Extensible Provision Protocol (EPP) >>> mapping for registry's maintenance notifications. >>> >>> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >>> >>> 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