Dear James,
I think the <info> response is in the section 4.1.2. So it should be
The description of the <org:status> element in 4.1.2 should be “One or more
<org:status> elements that contain the role statuses” instead of “Zero or more
<org:status> elements that contains the role type”. I believe the info
response should always include at least one role status value.
Linlin
zhoulin...@cnnic.cn
From: Gould, James
Date: 2018-05-04 20:59
To: Linlin Zhou; regext
Subject: Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt
Hi,
In reviewing the draft-ietf-regext-org changes in draft-ietf-regext-org-04, I
have the following feedback:
The description of the <org:status> element in 4.2.1 should be “One or more
<org:role> elements that contain the role statuses” instead of “Zero or more
<org:status> elements that contains the role type”. I believe the info
response should always include at least one role status value.
The description of the <org:status> element in 4.2.5 should be “Zero or more
<org:role> elements that contain the role statuses” instead of “Zero or more
<org:status> elements that contains the role type”.
In 4.2.5, change “A OPTIONAL <org:chg> element” to “An OPTIONAL <org:chg>
element”.
I recommend removing the third paragraph of section 8 “Implementation Status”,
since the sub-sections explicitly define the specific implementation status
information. At a minimum, I would like the sentence “Verisign has already
implemented this object mapping” to be removed. There is the misspelling of
“objecct” in that third paragraph.
I also recommend removing section 8.3, since I don’t believe implementation of
the Reseller Extension is relevant to the Organization Mapping.
I would remove the Informative Reference to draft-ietf-regext-reseller from the
draft (e.g., section 11.2).
—
JG
James Gould
Distinguished Engineer
jgo...@verisign.com
703-948-3271
12061 Bluemont Way
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From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Linlin Zhou
<zhoulin...@cnnic.cn>
Date: Friday, May 4, 2018 at 2:56 AM
To: regext <regext@ietf.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt
Dear all,
The org drafts have been updated to version 04 to address all the received
comments during WGLC. And a new section of implemetation status was added.
We'd like to have the chairs' instruction to the next step for these two drafts.
Regards,
Linlin
zhoulin...@cnnic.cn
From: internet-drafts
Date: 2018-05-04 13:51
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
CC: regext
Subject: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the
IETF.
Title : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization
Mapping
Authors : Linlin Zhou
Ning Kong
Guiqing Zhou
Xiaodong Lee
James Gould
Filename : draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt
Pages : 41
Date : 2018-05-03
Abstract:
This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
stored in a shared central repository. Specified in Extensible
Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-04
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-04
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-04
Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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