Hi, In reviewing the draft-ietf-regext-org changes in draft-ietf-regext-org-04, I have the following feedback:
1. The description of the <org:status> element in 4.2.1 should be “One or more <org:role> elements that contain the role statuses” instead of “Zero or more <org:status> elements that contains the role type”. I believe the info response should always include at least one role status value. 2. The description of the <org:status> element in 4.2.5 should be “Zero or more <org:role> elements that contain the role statuses” instead of “Zero or more <org:status> elements that contains the role type”. 3. In 4.2.5, change “A OPTIONAL <org:chg> element” to “An OPTIONAL <org:chg> element”. 4. I recommend removing the third paragraph of section 8 “Implementation Status”, since the sub-sections explicitly define the specific implementation status information. At a minimum, I would like the sentence “Verisign has already implemented this object mapping” to be removed. There is the misspelling of “objecct” in that third paragraph. 5. I also recommend removing section 8.3, since I don’t believe implementation of the Reseller Extension is relevant to the Organization Mapping. 6. I would remove the Informative Reference to draft-ietf-regext-reseller from the draft (e.g., section 11.2). — JG [cid:image001.png@01D255E2.EB933A30] James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com<http://verisigninc.com/> From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Linlin Zhou <zhoulin...@cnnic.cn> Date: Friday, May 4, 2018 at 2:56 AM To: regext <regext@ietf.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt Dear all, The org drafts have been updated to version 04 to address all the received comments during WGLC. And a new section of implemetation status was added. We'd like to have the chairs' instruction to the next step for these two drafts. Regards, Linlin ________________________________ zhoulin...@cnnic.cn From: internet-drafts<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> Date: 2018-05-04 13:51 To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-annou...@ietf.org> CC: regext<mailto:regext@ietf.org> Subject: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF. Title : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization Mapping Authors : Linlin Zhou Ning Kong Guiqing Zhou Xiaodong Lee James Gould Filename : draft-ietf-regext-org-04.txt Pages : 41 Date : 2018-05-03 Abstract: This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects stored in a shared central repository. Specified in Extensible Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide additional features required for the provisioning of organizations. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-04 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-04 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
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