On Tue, 11 Jun 2019 at 11:15, Justin Pryzby <pry...@telsasoft.com> wrote:
>
> On Mon, Jun 10, 2019 at 06:11:35PM -0400, Alvaro Herrera wrote:
> > On 2019-Jun-09, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> >
> > > I think it should say:
> > >
> > > |    Choosing the target number of partitions into which the table should 
> > > be
> > > |    divided is also a critical decision to make.  Not having enough
> >
> > I opined elsewhere in the thread that this phrase can be made into more
> > straightforward English:
> >
> >    Choosing the target number of partitions THAT the table should be
> >    divided INTO is also a critical decision to make.  Not having enough
> >
> > What do you think of that formulation?
>
> It originally said:
> | Choosing the number of partitions to divide the table into is also a
>
> So this mostly changes it back.
>
> One could also say:
> |    Another critical decision is [the choice of?] the number of partitions
> |    into which the table['s content?] should be divided...
>
> I'm okay with it if David is okay making the change :)

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