Hello Bradley & Tatsuo-san,
... references to the protocol version lacks homogeneity. ... I'd suggest to keep "the vX.0 protocol" for a short version, and "the version X.0 protocol" for long ...I agree. Change made.
Patch applies cleanly. Doc build ok.One part talks about "terminating line", the other of "termination line". I wonder whether one is better than the other?
-- Fabien.