Hi Shubham,

Some review comments for patch v11-0001.

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src/sgml/ref/pg_createsubscriber.sgml

1.
-    must accept local connections.
+    must accept local connections. If you are planning to use the
+    <option>--enable-two-phase</option> then you will also need to set the
+    <xref linkend="guc-max-prepared-transactions"/> appropriately.
    </para>


The missing word "switch"?

/If you are planning to use the <option>--enable-two-phase</option>/If
you are planning to use the <option>--enable-two-phase</option>
switch/


2.
    <para>
+    Unless the '--enable-two-phase' switch is specified,
     <application>pg_createsubscriber</application> sets up logical

Remove the single quotes, and use the proper SGML markup same as other
places where --enable-two-phase is mentioned.

<option>--enable-two-phase</option>

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3.
+ pg_log_warning_hint("You can use '--enable-two_phase' switch to
enable two_phase.");

3a.
Typo. The real switch name does not have underscores.

/--enable-two_phase/--enable-two-phase/

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3b.
I checked other PG source code, but I couldn't find any examples where
the switch is given in single quotes quite like this.

Maybe choose from one of the below instead:

SUGGESTION #1
Use the \"--enable-two-phase\" switch to enable two_phase.

SUGGESTION #2
Use the --enable-two-phase switch to enable two_phase.

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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