Hi. Here are some minor review comments for the docs patch v4-0001.

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doc/src/sgml/logical-replication.sgml

1. General

The SGML file wrapping can be fixed to fill up to 80 cols for some of
the paragraphs.

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2.
+   standby is promoted. They can continue subscribing to publications
now on the
+   new primary server without any loss of data. But please note that in case of
+   asynchronous replication, there remains a risk of data loss for transactions
+   that have been committed on the former primary server but have yet to be
+   replicated to the new primary server.
+  </para>

/in case/in the case/

/But please note that.../Note that.../

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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