On Thu, Jun 28, 2018 at 3:57 PM, Daniel Gustafsson <dan...@yesql.se> wrote:
> > On 27 Jun 2018, at 18:02, Yugo Nagata <nag...@sraoss.co.jp> wrote: > > > I found that there isn't explanation about EXCLUDING in CREATE TABLE doc. > > Attached is a patch to add this. I would appreciate it if a native > English > > speaker comments on this. > > + If <literal>EXCLUDING</literal> option <literal></literal> is > specified > > The empty <literal></literal> seems wrong. > > + after <literal>INCLUDING</literal> options, the specified thing is > excluded > > “thing” sounds a bit vague here (and in the last sentence as well), but I’m > also not sure what to use instead. “referenced objects" perhaps? > > +1 on documenting the EXCLUDING option though. > "is excluded" and "not copied" are redundant to each other and the first sentence is basically redundant with the second. Maybe try something like: It is legal to specify the same option multiple times - e.g., "INCLUDING option EXCLUDING option" - the outcome is whichever comes last in the command (i.e., in the example, option is excluded). David J.
