> On 27 Jun 2018, at 18:02, Yugo Nagata <nag...@sraoss.co.jp> wrote:

> I found that there isn't explanation about EXCLUDING in CREATE TABLE doc.
> Attached is a patch to add this. I would appreciate it if a native English
> speaker comments on this.

+      If <literal>EXCLUDING</literal> option <literal></literal> is specified

The empty <literal></literal> seems wrong.

+      after <literal>INCLUDING</literal> options, the specified thing is 
excluded

“thing” sounds a bit vague here (and in the last sentence as well), but I’m
also not sure what to use instead.  “referenced objects" perhaps?

+1 on documenting the EXCLUDING option though.

cheers ./daniel

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