On 8/8/23 11:13 PM, Robert Treat wrote:
"Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run additional, post-update steps; "The comma should be removed. "please see the release notes for earlier versions for details." Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get details."
Interestingly, I think this language has been unmodified for awhile. Upon reading it, I agree, and took your suggestions.
Thanks, Jonathan
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