On Mon, Aug 7, 2023 at 9:15 PM Jonathan S. Katz <jk...@postgresql.org> wrote: > > Hi, > > Attached is the release announcement draft for the 2023-08-10 update > release, which also includes the release of PostgreSQL 16 Beta 3. > > Please provide your feedback no later than August 10, 2023 0:00 AoE[1]. > > Thanks, > > Jonathan > > [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth
"Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run additional, post-update steps; " The comma should be removed. "please see the release notes for earlier versions for details." Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get details." Robert Treat https://xzilla.net
