On 11/8/21, 2:19 PM, "Joshua Brindle" <joshua.brin...@crunchydata.com> wrote:
> Thanks for the review, attached is an update with that comment fixed
> and also sgml documentation changes that I missed earlier.

I think there are a number of documentation changes that are still
missing.  I did a quick scan and saw the "is member of" language in
func.sgml, monitoring.sgml, pgbuffercache.sgml, pgfreespacemap.sgml,
pgrowlocks.sgml, pgstatstatements.sgml, and pgvisibility.sgml.

<para>
 By default, the <structname>pg_shmem_allocations</structname> view can be
-   read only by superusers or members of the 
<literal>pg_read_all_stats</literal>
-   role.
+   read only by superusers or roles with privilges of the
+   <literal>pg_read_all_stats</literal> role.
</para>
</sect1>

nitpick: "privileges" is misspelled.

Nathan

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