On Fri, Feb 21, 2025 at 1:18 PM Brad DeJong <bpd0...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi all, > > In the section on dynamic monitoring, I found the following > sentence confusing. I originally read it as "enclose the script" > and "used to allow that too to be checked" instead of "enclose > the script used" and "to allow that too to be checked". > > When discussing information found using dynamic tracing, > be sure to enclose the script used to allow that too to be > checked and discussed. > > Could it be rephrased as something like this? > > When discussing information found using dynamic tracing, > be sure to enclose the script used to find the information > so that both the script and the information can be checked > and discussed. > > Regards, > Brad > > C:\src\postgresql\doc\src\sgml>git diff -p > diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml > index 71c4f96d05..d89261326a 100644 > --- a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml > +++ b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml > @@ -7428,7 +7428,8 @@ Total time (ns) 2312105013 > be meaningless. In most cases where problems are found it is the > instrumentation that is at fault, not the underlying system. When > discussing information found using dynamic tracing, be sure to enclose > - the script used to allow that too to be checked and discussed. > + the script used to find that information so that both the script > + and the information can be checked and discussed. > </para> > </sect2>
+1 from me. Robert Treat https://xzilla.net
