Hi Shubham,

I took a look at the patch v2-0001. Here are some review comments.

1.
Previously when this DOCS page was referring to the --publication and
--subscription it was calling those "switches". I don't know why, but
it does.

Maybe calling them "options" is ok too, but personally (for
consistency with the above) I would've stuck with the same "switches"
terminology.

1a.
/If --publication option is not specified.../If the --publication
switch is not specified.../

or maybe just omit the term entirely
/If --publication option is not specified.../If --publication is not
specified.../

~

1b.
/If --subscription option is not specified.../If the --subscription
switch is not specified.../

or maybe just omit the term entirely
/If --subscription option is not specified.../If --subscription is not
specified.../

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2.
Although the patch addresses the reported problems, I think the same
problem exists for "replication-slot-name". e.g. the DOCS are saying
"If replication-slot-name is not specified..." although there is no
such thing -- it is called "--replication-slot"

So, the patch should also be fixing that one using the same consistent wording.

e.g.
/If replication-slot-name is not specified.../If the
--replication-slot switch is not specified.../
or
/If replication-slot-name is not specified.../If --replication-slot is
not specified.../

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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