I just froze the RFC that contains Artistic-2.0.

Here are the differences between beta3 and beta4 of the Artistic License.

I did the following things:

   * clarified the "In addition," confusion that Dave brought up.

   * Returned to saying "Freely Available" instead of "Exact License of".  I
     did this so that, for example, people could make their changes
     available under the modified BSD license if they want.  It seemed to me
     that there is no reason to require that they must use the the same
     license as the Standard Version.  (Heck, even perl5 has code under the
     (modified?) BSD license, so we should definitely be tolerant of people
     who make their changes to Perl available that way).

   * Fixed some typos

 
*** Artistic-2.0beta3.txt       Sun Oct  1 17:19:16 2000
--- Artistic-2.0.txt    Sun Oct  1 17:53:16 2000
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*** 1,5 ****
                              The Artistic License
!                          Version 2.0beta3, October 2000
  
                           Copyright (C) 2000, Larry Wall.
          Everyone is permitted to copy and distribute verbatim copies
--- 1,5 ----
                              The Artistic License
!                          Version 2.0beta4, October 2000
  
                           Copyright (C) 2000, Larry Wall.
          Everyone is permitted to copy and distribute verbatim copies
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*** 48,53 ****
--- 48,66 ----
                     Package to another party.  It does not refer to licensing
                     fees.
  
+ "Freely Available" means that:
+ 
+        (a) no fee is charged for the right to use the item (though a
+            Distribution Fee may be charged).
+ 
+        (b) recipients of the item may redistribute it under the same
+            conditions they received it.
+ 
+        (c) If the item is a binary, object code, bytecode, the complete
+            corresponding machine-readable source code is included with the
+            item.
+ 
+ 
           Permission for Use and Modification Without Redistribution
  
    (1) You are permitted to use the Standard Version and create and use
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*** 80,87 ****
        and distribute that Modified Version (either gratis or for a
        Distribution Fee, and with or without a corresponding binary, bytecode
        or object code version of the Modified Version) provided that You
!       clearly indicate what You made to the Package, and provided that You
!       do at least ONE of the following:
  
         (a) make the Modified Version available to the Originator(s) of the
             Standard Version, under the exact license of the Standard
--- 93,100 ----
        and distribute that Modified Version (either gratis or for a
        Distribution Fee, and with or without a corresponding binary, bytecode
        or object code version of the Modified Version) provided that You
!       clearly indicate what changes You made to the Package, and provided
!       that You do at least ONE of the following:
  
         (a) make the Modified Version available to the Originator(s) of the
             Standard Version, under the exact license of the Standard
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*** 90,104 ****
  
         (b) modify any installation scripts and procedures so that
             installation of the Modified Version will never conflict with an
!            installation of the Standard Version.  Each program installed by
!            the Modified Version must include clear documentation describing
!            how it differs from the Standard Version.  In addition, your
!            Modified Version must bear a name that is different from the
!            Standard Version.
  
         (c) permit and encourage anyone who receives a copy of the Modified
!            Version to make the source code of the Modified Version available
!            to others under the exact license of the Standard Version.
  
        If Your Modified Version is in turn derived from a Modified Version
        made by a third party, then You are still required to ensure that Your
--- 103,117 ----
  
         (b) modify any installation scripts and procedures so that
             installation of the Modified Version will never conflict with an
!            installation of the Standard Version, include for each program
!            installed by the Modified Version clear documentation describing
!            how it differs from the Standard Version, and rename your
!            Modified Version so that the name is substantially different from
!            the Standard Version.
  
         (c) permit and encourage anyone who receives a copy of the Modified
!            Version permission to make your modifications Freely Available in
!            some specific way.                                               
  
        If Your Modified Version is in turn derived from a Modified Version
        made by a third party, then You are still required to ensure that Your
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*** 127,140 ****
  
         (b) ensure that the installation of Your non-source Modified Version
             does not conflict in any way with an installation of the Standard
!            Version, and include for each program installed by the Modified
             Version clear documentation describing how it differs from the
!            Standard Version.  In addition, your Modified Version must bear a
!            name that is different from the Standard Version.
  
         (c) ensure that the Modified Version includes notification of the
!            changes made from the Standard Version, and offer the
!            machine-readable source of the Modified Version by mail order.
  
  
          Permissions for Inclusion of the Package in Aggregate Works
--- 140,155 ----
  
         (b) ensure that the installation of Your non-source Modified Version
             does not conflict in any way with an installation of the Standard
!            Version, include for each program installed by the Modified
             Version clear documentation describing how it differs from the
!            Standard Version, and rename your Modified Version so that the
!            name is substantially different from the Standard Version.
  
         (c) ensure that the Modified Version includes notification of the
!            changes made from the Standard Version, and offer to provide
!            machine-readable source code (under a license that permits making
!            that source code Freely Available) of the Modified Version via
!            mail order.
  
  
          Permissions for Inclusion of the Package in Aggregate Works

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