I, generally, agree with Ann. I just don't discern missing blue. Think I'd, also, suggest cropping the top, but leaving some space above the guy's head and using the clone tool to eliminate what remains of the ceiling light. While at it, I'd remove the light reflections on the green doors behind them. I'd like not to be drawn to the red rug in the hall background. If the color could be knocked down a bit, I believe it would help.
Jack --- On Sat, 2/26/11, Igor Roshchin <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Igor Roshchin <[email protected]> > Subject: Your opinion on composition is needed > To: [email protected] > Date: Saturday, February 26, 2011, 3:01 PM > > Hi All, > > My wife would like to hear what different photographers > think > if this composition works or not: > http://flic.kr/p/9mbxex > She took this photo at a business event. > > Second question is what would you do differently (change > the > composition/crop..) - without moving/orchestrating people, > - > so that it would look better. > > Thank you in advance for all the response, > > Igor > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
