It's close to working. But I think there's too much dead space at the top of the frame. If it was framed lower to include the fee of the two figures in the rear, it would work better. But I like the mix of near and far figures. Paul On Feb 26, 2011, at 6:01 PM, Igor Roshchin wrote:
> > Hi All, > > My wife would like to hear what different photographers think > if this composition works or not: > http://flic.kr/p/9mbxex > She took this photo at a business event. > > Second question is what would you do differently (change the > composition/crop..) - without moving/orchestrating people, - > so that it would look better. > > Thank you in advance for all the response, > > Igor > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

