Hi Marnie; The web version has enough flowers in enough focus that I wouldn't be bothered by it. Two things bother me. The depth of field is too shallow, it gets too out of focus too soon especially on the purple flower in the center of the photo. 2nd, there is a purple flower just coming into focus on the right hand side that gets just a bit cut off. I would have moved the composition slightly right to get it all in and in the process lose a bit of the dead space on the left. It might make a nice(r) 8x10 or other size with a 4x5 aspect ratio. the more I look at it, the more I like it.
My 2 ¢ Butch Each man had only one genuine vocation - to find the way to himself. Hermann Hesse (Demian)
