----- Original Message ----- From: "Paul Stenquist" Subject: Re: Yet another PAW
> > > I think this is well executed on your part. Turning her head in a bit > more and perhaps using a slightly longer lens would have helped flatten > out her nose. The position of her left arm may be a bit awkward, but I > guess she's shielding her breast. If I was going to crop her left > elbow, I might also have cropped some of that big hair. The light is > nice, the exposure, composition and framing are nice. Hey, can I be > blunt? You did a good job of making an average model look good. Thanks Paul. William Robb
