I think this is well executed on your part. Turning her head in a bit more and perhaps using a slightly longer lens would have helped flatten out her nose. The position of her left arm may be a bit awkward, but I guess she's shielding her breast. If I was going to crop her left elbow, I might also have cropped some of that big hair. The light is nice, the exposure, composition and framing are nice. Hey, can I be blunt? You did a good job of making an average model look good.
Paul
William Robb wrote:
This is from Saturdays shoot. I don't know if it is good or bad. There are things I kinda like about it, and things I don't. http://users.accesscomm.ca/wrobb/paw/IMGP2786.html Comments are allowed. William Robb
