Hi Deb,

On Sun, Mar 30, 2025 at 4:19 PM Deb Cooley via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
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> draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-23: No Objection
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> Thanks to Joe Salowey for his secdir reviews.
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> One very small comment:
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> Abstract, para 2:  'bring up'?  what does this mean?  Are we bringing up
> protocols, like we raise children?  Or does it mean something else?
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Dhruv: I agree that phrasing needs to change especially since we don't use
it in the body of the I-D. I suggest -

OLD:

   Additionally, this document updates RFC 8231 to allow stateful bring
   up of an SR Label Switched Path (LSP), without using the path
   computation request and reply messages.

NEW:

   Additionally, this document updates RFC 8231 to allow the set up

   of an SR Label Switched Path (LSP) in the stateful PCE model,
without using the path
   computation request and reply messages.

END

Thanks!
Dhruv (as Document Shepherd)


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