Thanks a lot, Mike for review and comments. For adding references into terminology section - I'll re-work that section as there was also suggestion/comment from Med in other mail thread to do not combine acronyms and definitions in same section.
I'll submit single version later with comments addressed from both mail threads. Regards, Samuel -----Original Message----- From: Mike Bishop via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> Sent: Tuesday, March 25, 2025 9:29 PM To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> Cc: draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org; d...@dhruvdhody.com; d...@dhruvdhody.com Subject: Mike Bishop's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-23: (with COMMENT) Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-23: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Many abbreviated terms in the Introduction aren't defined until Section 2. (PCC, SR-TE, LSPs, etc.) Consider expanding these on first use. Further, several of the abbreviations expanded in Section 2 don't have references to the RFCs where the terms are specified. This makes it difficult to explore further. For example, PCC is defined in RFC5440 which is not referenced by this document until Section 6. Compare this to the Terminology section of RFC8231, which provides explicit sources for each term. Throughout 3.x, should the names of these elements have "The" or "A" before them? Also, s/consist/consists/. The sentence in the Acknowledgement lacks a subject. Who would like to thank these people? _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list -- pce@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to pce-le...@ietf.org
