John, We (authors) believe version 12 ( https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color/12/) addresses all the comments that have been raised so far.
Regards, -Pavan (on behalf of the authors) On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 7:57 AM John Scudder <jgs= 40juniper....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > Hi Authors, > > It looks like there are at least a few outstanding comments to resolve > before I send this to the RFC editor. For example, see below where Dhruv > requests/suggests some small updates. > > I haven’t comprehensively reviewed all the comments, so there may be more, > please check. It’s always OK to propose not accepting a suggestion, but in > that case please respond indicating that’s the resolution. > > Thanks, > > —John > > On Feb 20, 2025, at 3:58 AM, Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Éric, > > On Wed, Feb 19, 2025 at 5:38 PM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for >> draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11: No Objection >> >> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all >> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this >> introductory paragraph, however.) >> >> >> Please refer to >> https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ >> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Hw6GPY3FHXyYNPwTzn_SPluBFaTs9MaQKB5SBuhztOasUCNsiAwUmGCn16HFs1dK3d8LIzcEPgliwKPb$> >> for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. >> >> >> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color/ >> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Hw6GPY3FHXyYNPwTzn_SPluBFaTs9MaQKB5SBuhztOasUCNsiAwUmGCn16HFs1dK3d8LIzcEPq4DmoAJ$> >> >> >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> COMMENT: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> Thanks for the work done in this document. >> >> About 5.2. Information and Data Models, if there is already an applicable >> YANG >> data model, then please add a reference, else suggest removing this >> section. >> >> > Dhruv: The section is part of a template that we follow as per RFC 6123. > Maybe authors can add this sentence to add a reference - "To serve > this purpose, the PCEP YANG model [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-yang] could > be extended in the future."? > > > >> Suggest using a normative reference to all the IANA registries used to >> clear >> any ambiguities, e.g., for "STATEFUL-PCE-CAPABILITY TLV Flag Field" add a >> reference to >> >> https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml#stateful-pce-capability-tlv-flag-field >> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*stateful-pce-capability-tlv-flag-field__;Iw!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Hw6GPY3FHXyYNPwTzn_SPluBFaTs9MaQKB5SBuhztOasUCNsiAwUmGCn16HFs1dK3d8LIzcEPscS8COZ$> >> >> >> > Dhruv: This style is uncommon in PCE WG documents. Since the name of the > registry and fact that it is under PCEP Numbers is mentioned, there should > not be any ambiguity! > > Authors - please use the term registry and registry group instead of > sub-registry. See https://www.iana.org/help/protocol-registration > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/help/protocol-registration__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Hw6GPY3FHXyYNPwTzn_SPluBFaTs9MaQKB5SBuhztOasUCNsiAwUmGCn16HFs1dK3d8LIzcEPtBU0jcr$> > > Thanks! > Dhruv > > > >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Pce mailing list -- pce@ietf.org >> To unsubscribe send an email to pce-le...@ietf.org >> > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list -- pce@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to pce-le...@ietf.org > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list -- pce@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to pce-le...@ietf.org >
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